Double Vision: Author's Analysis

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This page is for my comments on my first novel, Double Vision. Overall writing it was a great experience, but the writing itself is indisputably awful. You might have to read the excerpts to decide if you agree with me, but you may want to save yourself the pain and take my word for it.

That said, here is a little discussion of what I did badly and what I did right in my first foray into long fiction at age fourteen.

Good things:


Bad stuff:


If you were amused by this and want to see more old bad writing, be sure and check out the "ancient history" section of my writing page.

If you're curious about my current skills in the long fiction department, check out the novels in my "current projects" section.


BACKLINKS:

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WRITING PAGE
LONG FICTION PAGE
DOUBLE VISION PAGE