After She Comes Along
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Review #1: Reviewed by: The Author Herself Comments: Get in, say something, get out. That's what I was trying to do with this short-short, and it ended up being the shortest story I've written in my adult life. I like to think I did all right evoking a certain atmosphere and an oddly posed conversation designed to make a point about entitlement--it isn't an accident that I presented this with a boy trying to tell a girl that she belongs to him simply because he says she should play a certain part in his story. I didn't stay there long enough for it to get preachy, though, so I'm happy with it.
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