Reviewed by: The Author Herself
This isn't the first time I've tried writing an unlikable narrator, but it's the first time I attempted it with third person so the narration could kind of allow him to be framed unflatteringly. I enjoyed presenting my protagonist as a bit absurd, though the conversation with the clone felt like it strayed into occasional preachiness, and I think I did okay at capturing a suspicious, petty person who lies to himself and suspects everyone else of lying to him. One of my favorite things is his wife getting compared to a chicken. And also being morally opposed to something even if you don't know what it is.
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