Joint Custody Acknowledgments Page
So far only four people have been actively helping me with this book, because it is incomplete and there are very few people with whom I share in-progress works. But here they are:
- Mike Lee has been very valuable in editing it so far. He gave some great early comments.
- Keggernaught has read through what I had so far at the time and has provided me with valuable insights and attention to detail.
- Amethyst was very sweet with her compliments, saying she thought the characters were very real, which gave me a nice ego boost and some reassurance that I'm doing everything right.
- Jessie offered some really nice compliments on my character development in this one—she loves Bay—and some word choice ideas for making Bay's tone sound a little less mature when my sentence structure overwhelmed his usual voice.
Hopefully this feedback will continue as I produce chapters.
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